Jules the jester

I liek ho whe thinks wench at an eleven year old. Made me chuckle :D Just liek teh first part i enjoyed it. thought it could do with abit more ...

It seems Interesting. i Like the sound of it and am wondering how this story will develop. I loved the way you betrayed the Leader of the army. he seemed ...

I agree with you sureal. Shan did use a bit too many exclamation marks. They were very interesting. i enjoyed them. would of prefered if he had cut the series ...

Damn! I was looking forward to the next part :( But on a brighter note. Good luck with getting it published. :D :D

That was Waaaayyyyy toooo short! =[. i have really enoyed them and when i say the title i thought YAY. And it was enjoyable as always but like i said ...

I liked it. I love learning about religion. I am not really religious in anyway but i like religion and this made me chuckle. I just had a weird vision ...

One little thing annoyed me. Being a history boff i noticed you had called what i believed to be the bad people the SS. That was the abreviation for a ...

I am sorry but i seriously did not enjoy this. I thought that there wasnt much variation in the sentance structure. They do this. They do that then this. is ...

I liked it but it wasnt the best executed poem like incandesdence said. You shoukd read the poem vultures by Chinua Achebe here is a link. That is how a ...

Really dark and evil my friend. i didnt know you wrote these sort of things. I aint much of a horror fan but i enjoyed it. I didnt enjoy the ...

Enjoyed it but i believe that it moved a bit too quick for my liking. slow down the plotline a bit and expand on the details. i also got a ...